Thursday, March 22, 2012

A metaphor

I stood on the bank of a river,
stuck in a toe and felt
invigorated, refreshed, yet chilled to the bone.
And looking over the waves, I perceived
swimmers in the torrent.
Some struggled, nearly sinking,
others floated, eyes glowing,
buoyed up by the icy flow.
I had thought I could swim;
now, I do not know.
But I long, I long
to the core of my soul,
to join those who float,
to float to the sea,
and see what becomes of me.

3 comments:

  1. Nice poem! I never can seem to find words that rhyme, do you ever have that problem? Emma of Tin Lane

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  2. Definitely. :D One solution is to take the word you want to rhyme and go through the alphabet putting different letters in front: rain...brain, drain, gain...

    I also adore Google! Words to rhyme with "sartorial"...Oh, hey, "historical!" Shazam!

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